Emo-Corner Forum - Poems and Lyrics

Visual Concept Contest: Voting

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 12:40:28 -0800

Works the same as last time. Winner will be chosen by poll, and the prize awarded as soon as possible. Voting closes in seven days.

Links to the entries are here.

Vella:
http://www.emo-corner.com/forums/index.php...st&p=866856

tbone:(:
http://www.emo-corner.com/forums/index.php...st&p=870374

RupeeWhore [Kelsey]:
http://www.emo-corner.com/forums/index.php...st&p=870434

After this comp there will not be another, at least for the moment.

Who Am I?

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 08:42:12 -0800

Who am I to you?
Do I count in your life?
I've stuck like glue
with you but why do I strive?
Am I looking for more?
from you or is it useless?
I'm walking out the door
Do you care or is it best?
If I truly walk out
what would I accomplish?
you didn't know about
my only single wish
was to be with you
and no one else
the feelings I had were true
my mind now dwells
upon my reasoning to try
a possibility for us
brings a tear to my eye
when I gave you all my trust
what am I do to do now?
who will I look forward to?
heart's breaking with no sound
darkness replaces where light grew
the windows of the soul rain
the door has permenantly shut
the brain has gone insane
because this scar is a deep cut

you were supposed to be my only
my one and all true love
but now the heart's hallow and empty
and I seek for guidance from above...

My Drawings...

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 08:33:13 -0800

yep...this is what I do in my free time, when I dont skateboard..or mess with my hair..O.o

tell me what you think<3

Picture...

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 08:20:27 -0800

Ok, so for graphics i've been researching a few artists, one of them being Tim Burton, as his style is brilliant for working with monoprints.
So here's a drawing/edit I did, may I remind you that i'm a photoshop noob. :]

Ok So.....

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 08:14:34 -0800

here are sum pictures of me
I accept creative critisim

Darkness Will Consume

Fri, 20 Nov 2009 05:11:35 -0800

hey guys im not sure if this is any good, my head was pounding when i wrote it

Darkness will consume

The Darkness,
Deep inside
Were the lost reside

It�s hard to see
Hard to find
Hard to show you.

But once your there
It�ll be much
So much harder

�Cause in this Darkness;
Were the lost reside;
We found our,
True lives.

The Darkness
Consumes Me
The Darkness
Consumes All

Inspiration

Thu, 19 Nov 2009 20:21:36 -0800

If there's a post like this I'm very sorry but I'm in a hurry.

I write poems thanks to Shel Silverstein. (May he rest in peace)
He inspired me and the greatest band ever.

I was wondering if anyone inspired you.
Or what inspires you.

Adult Decision

Thu, 19 Nov 2009 19:37:20 -0800

I'm in tears with my hand covering my mouth;
I stare at the ceiling, I'm having doubts.
Who can I tell without the secret told to all;
what will they say passing me in the halls?
I found out today after taking the test;
it came out positive, to me it's like death.
I fear he will leave me and deny that it's his;
as if he's not the only one that i've been with.
I sit up on my bed and wipe a tear from my cheek;
pick up my cell that layed at my feet.
Dials his number and waits for his voice;
he answers and waited, but hears no noise.
He repeats his 'hello' but it feels like 'goodbye'
so I speak up with a stressing sigh
I tell him what's happened,
he doesn't say a word;
so I ask if he's there,
and wondered if he had heard.
He asks if I'm sure, with a panicked tone;
tears start again, for fear I'll be alone.
I don't know if I can handle this, this seems so unreal;
pregnant at sixteen; scared is what I feel.
But he's still there, not denying a thing;
but I'm still unsure, not changing what I think.
He says he loves me and everything will be fine;
but his words sound insincere, it sounded like a line.
We hang up and decided to talk more at school;
I feel ashamed and stupid, a careless fool.
The next day he confronted me, and asked what we should do;
I just shrugged, I wish I knew.
But I didn't love him,
we've only been together a month, just four weeks;
I don't think I want to be with him,
so why don't I want him to leave?
But I don't want to do this alone, it's his problem too;
I shouldn't be the only one having to suffer, what do I do?
Abortion, adoption? I don't think I can;
just give up my baby? or leave it in someone elses hands?
God I'm so stupid, but I'll get through this somehow;
I wish I knew the solution,
sometime soon or right now.
I'm just a teen, but now I have these options;
keeping it, or putting it up for adoption.

My Little Angel

Thu, 19 Nov 2009 16:22:50 -0800

So yeah, this is something I drew, except for the wings...because I suck at drawing angel wings. My cousin did it for me :\ so kuddos to him. I just drew the person and did the coloring :]

http://www.emo-corner.com/forums/index.php?act=attach&type=post&id=13636

The Angel

Thu, 19 Nov 2009 15:23:46 -0800

The Angel

Black charred wings
a burnt tortured soul.
The angel's life
grey, torn, and dull.

Poor tortured angel,
life gone; decaying.
And i didn't stop when,
Help me was all hes saying.

I could have stopped,
and helped or cared.
I didn't do anything,
becuase I was scared.

The angel looked me,
straight in my eyes.
I sat and watched,
as he cries.

He put his little face,
in his hands.
I wondered if he,
understands.

I heard him whimper,
and i started to cry.
Its not fair that;
the angel has to die.

I wondered who did
this, who cuased this strife.
Who took away the,
poor angel's life.

Did the angel have a family?
Did the angel have a friend?
Becuase nobody but me,
is here to see this end.

I gripped the angel's wing,
and said a solemn prayer.
I WILL get revenge on,
the angel's slayer.

I got up to leave,
but he yelled don't go!
I had, enough of the
angel's tale of woe.

an original poem by me secret hunter aka shelby young